I'm working on the story artwork in the Ellie flash right now. Since it's just bonus content, I don't want to put too much time and effort into it. But that leads to me not being very happy with the results and becoming reluctant to work on it instead. It's like an evil circle... Blarf.
So while I've been making mini-steps of progress on that, I spent the remaining time making progress on the character art. While I'm happy with some, others I might feel there are issues with. So if you'd like to help me out with some feedback, I'd appreciate it.
Here's the latest versions of the relevant characters:
Sofi:
Sofi Nude
Sofi Partly Clothed
Sofi Clothed
To respond to what Ano Von Einmous commented on the previous news post; Sofi doesn't hate her own breasts or have any sort of breast envy, she just hates to be reminded of their intended biological function. She's always been flat chested anyhow, but there's still a little bit of chest there.
I'm considering Sofi mostly done so far, although I feel like putting the hat on her makes her eyes look really big. Is it something I should worry about?
Next, Lollo:
Lollo Nude
Lollo Ghost Form
Lollo Clothed (and with normal skincolor)
These are still WIPs, so some things are still up to change a little. But I consider them mostly solid. Bit worried about how the bra turned out, otherwise generally happy with the results. Would like to hear your thoughts on Lollo too.
Psycho Girl:
Nude Psycho Girl
Partly Clothed Psycho Girl
Fully Clothed Psycho Girl
These are versions from various states of development. I'm not as confident in the look here, and I will go in and edit things til they look just right. It's mostly the area from below the chest that has me worried.
I'll leave you with these for now, we shall see if I can manage to improve them until next update!