The Storyteller

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2010-08-04 18:05:33

Dokuro, you're really giving the story a higher score than it really deserves. There are too many mistakes within the story. Some of the scenes at the end were too short for my liking. Sadly, I suck at English. Anyways, the Influence isn't over. The conflicts of the other catpersons and Rick still have not been resolved. I have addressed five of the 10 conflicts so far and only concluded one. I have left scenes in the story that would leave the curious filled with questions. Aaron is no hero. He just nudged fate a little. His part of the story isn't done either. There are plenty of people he has to help. Fate can be a pain you know? ~The Storyteller~