Comment #4870
PSI Starman
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2011-10-16 17:10:30
Fair enough, but you seem to write fine in the bios of every character. I dunno. ...To be super honest, I actually used one of your bios as insperation and advice as to how I could make my story/book better. I am writing one, and I couldn't tell what was missing... I still can't tell, either. But I DO know that your story posseses depth... like, when you read it, you are completely absorbed into the story. I know I was.
Rock Candy48724870
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2011-10-17 01:53:30
Well, I did have someone fix the spelling and grammar errors. I'm still not happy with the bios, so I'm updating them again.