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Chris5685
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2016-10-25 14:31:17
It might be because you changed the artstyle, but Zu's eyes feel a bit too big and rounded, she looks like those "how humanity will look like in x years" pictures. Her mouth also feels too wide compared to the size and shape of her face. Have you deliberately lenghtened her face, or it just happened during the design process? Also, I miss her cheeks, her face looks a bit flat without them. The next thing I noticed is that her hands and feet are a bit big compared to the other parts of her body. She looks like an early teen going through a growth spurt, the pic on the header of your website is the closest thing to an actual short young adult in terms of proportions. I found such changes in the other profile pics too, but this is the first one that feels so radically different from before. The most interesting thing is that in your hand drawn pictures you very rarely make such mistakes or changes, I literally went through like ten pages of your artworks to check, and even the cartoon logic porn scenes look like actual people in terms of proportions.
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2016-10-25 20:25:41
With her "eyes", do you mean just her irises? Because the eyes in whole aren't really different from the usual. Her head length is the same as usual. Not sure what makes you think it's longer? The mouth is an exaggerated smile, I don't think making it smaller would turn out well. I suppose her hands and feet might be a little large, but that's not difficult to change. The only thing I can see myself is the hand up in the air is too large at least. I've always been told I draw hands and feet too tiny, are you sure it's just not you being used to that? My drawing style keeps changing, still. You're saying that all of my profile images have odd proportions? I'd like some more elaboration on that and some of these points. I draw these on paper before I color them. So the mistakes that show up here are made beforehand too.
Chris5685
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2016-10-26 09:15:29
No, not her irises, but her pupils. They are too big compared to her iris and the size of the actual eye. Also she used to have her eyes more squared on the lower end, but that is a design choice I can live with. About the head lenght: I imagined her cheeks a bit more puffy, wide and round based on previous works you have done, maybe that's why she feels different now, flat compared to previous renditions. Or maybe because of the perspective. I don't really have a problem with her smile now that I stared at her for a few minutes, it just feels like 12 pixels too long on the right side than how I'd draw her if I could. Hands and feet: my biggest issue is her right hand. It's the furthest one from the observer, but it's the biggest. Otherwise her proportions look exactly like my niece when she was 12, a thin frame with relatively "big" hands and feet. I don't agree with people who said that you make too small hands and feet, their size fits with the character's stature. She's an adult, she may have had size 36 feet when she was 14, but then her body got some nice curves without her feet and hands growing. "Donner's done her" and "Where am I?" are both good examples on spot- on proportions for Zu, at least in my opinion. About profile images: I don't know what kind of process you use for coloring, but it definitely makes them look artificial, especially Za and Ellie. That's why I differentiated your daily, uncolored drawings from their actual profile pictures. I thought that you did those completely on a computer. "Demonic Sofi colored" feels much easier on my eyes, it's the best example I can refer to. Another thing that I just realised while going through your library of pictures is that you don't use black lines on the character's bends and outlines in their profile pics. Those give a nice contrast to show off their bodies and emphasize smaller details, while keeping a hand drawn feel to them (which is a very important factor for me). That's about it.
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2016-10-30 11:03:24
Irises, pupils, part of the same thing. Ye, the bump on the cheek has slowly been shrinking with time. I don't like the look of it, so it has become near nonexistent. Zu is still supposed to be rather short and thin, only a measy 1.60. But ye, I didn't really like how the hand turned out anyway. Don't see too much problem with the size of the feet, though. Maybe the one up in the air, but the grounded one seems OK to me. That's something that I can't avoid. Drawing on paper will always make them seem more natural. When I digitalize them I don't want to keep the hand drawn look, I completely redraw the scanned image in flash. Using black outlines makes it more difficult to make out different objects and what ends where, which I want to avoid. Using colored outlines helps differenciating things.
Chris5685
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2016-10-30 15:44:40
Never mind dude, it's just a diference in taste then, no big deal. She's still the same lovely little lady, no matter how you draw her.
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2016-10-30 18:37:04
It's good to get feedback nonetheless.
Clicky
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2016-10-29 18:13:39
Smaller feet are better! I like it when my cock is longer than a woman's foot, then I stick it up her butt!