Chris5685

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2016-10-04 16:18:51

Ellie's bio is pretty solid. The only things I miss is a few examples for what she likes/ dislikes and why she does so, what motivates her in her career and personal life, and some basic points about how she sees other people and the world in general. I know that some of this info is in their bios, but since your characters have pretty long histories behind them, it would be easier for people who may use them in stories to just look at a reference sheet about their most defining characteristics, instead of going through the whole story every time they need to look up something. If I remember correctly, you had something like this in the older biographies, and it was really useful. Another thing I like is that you written about her experience with sexuality very briefly this time. That's good in my opinion, because you explain her "hedgehog 's dilemma" without too much unnecessary details on the events leading to it. Those events can be detailed in separate stories if you want to. All in all, good job, man.