Comment #14361
Chris5685
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2015-11-24 15:04:07

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Just some random story including Sofi and her (probable) interest in urbex, a derelict factory, and weird shit being done to people. I have some problems though, namely kepping consistent (I write something, and then have to go back 20 A4 pages to modify stuff), and the fact that IMHO I don't really have a large enough vocabulary and knowlege of the english language to provide an interesting read with methaphors and stuff. Another thing is that I want to keep Zoo alive, since she is my favourite by a long shot, but it's pretty hard to come up with excuses when she's sneaking through an r&d complex. Right now I'm done with the "prelude", but my workplace took a lot of time and energy during the last few weeks, and I dont want to just scamp something together.
Rock Candy1436214361
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2015-11-24 15:13:21
I could proof read it and try to help you out if you want to.
Chris5685
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2015-11-24 16:24:40
Thanks! I'll correct and add a few things when I can, and then send it to the e-mail address found in the about section, unless you have a better suggestion.
Rock Candy1436414363
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2015-11-24 18:33:01
The email is good.