Comment #13288
Chris5685
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2015-03-18 11:12:03
I randomly found your site about a week ago and I have to say that you made a neat little universe. As a veteran bookworm, I really like the new backstory, it is much more believable and consistent than the old one (actually it's hauntingly similar to what happened to one of my family members). Also, the better description of Elias and the bullies adds a lot to the story, and makes Elias himself a lot more interesting and likeable than before. All in all it was a great read, and I would really enjoy a series of short stories about Zu and her friends, their adventures and daily stuff. Keep up the good work! (Sorry if my english is broken, the last time I had to make up my own sentences was in high school, and that was a loooong time ago)
Rock Candy1328913288
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2015-03-18 11:18:32
Your english is OK. Don't worry. I'm glad you liked it, and that the changes I made made it seem more realistic. As for stories, I have a bunch of other bios to fix up too first...