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2982015-02-25 14:49:56
Well, as it sits the story sits at 13 pages. Given some time (and a little creative freedom [don't worry, I'm not changing anything character-wise or timeline-wise! Just how it's written.]), it should come out as detailed as it needs to be. I can't say how long it would be, but the way I think it would be best written would be as a third-person omniscient, basically being a narrator that knows everything. That way all the details are retained, the events as they're told are presented as already being passed, and a sense of having a personal connection is established. Would that work?
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2982015-02-26 01:26:59
Yeah, it would be good. Keep in mind that there are still things that need to be worked out, so if you're rewriting it I kind of need to talk more with ya.
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