Comment #12797
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The Phantom
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2015-01-09 00:29:01
Wait... I actually found a...problem (or two). Why the hell doesn't get a god damn rape test? Why aren't the cops called? The bullies can be VERY easily tracked down if the cops are given descriptions of them. besides, can't they get a DNA test from the bullies' cum? Other than that, solid story.
Rock Candy1280012797
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2015-01-09 05:52:09
What's a rape test, and who would call the cops?
The Phantom
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2015-01-09 14:58:09
A rape test is an examination on someone who was said to be raped. They see if there was forced entry, or any wounds caused by the supposed rapist. Does no one do any rape tests in Sweden? Also, I was talking about AFTER Zu told Sixten what happened to her. Why didn't anyone tell the cops that Zu was raped after they found out?
Rock Candy1280212801
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2015-01-09 16:36:04
Who found out? Zu told Sixten? What are you even talking about?
The Phantom's getting annoyed.
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2015-01-09 17:11:28
Zu told Sixten, Six told all the other catgirls, for some reason the cops aren't called (to my knowlage). Do I make sense now?
Rock Candy1280412803
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2015-01-09 17:59:35
Are you still referencing the outdated shit I wrote? Didn't I tell you to forget about that since I've completely changed everything about that a while ago?
The Phantom
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2015-01-09 20:01:27
You changed it? I thought it was still being rewritten.
Rock Candy1280812805
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2015-01-10 03:08:57
Yes, I've changed it three times already.
The Phantom
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2015-01-10 15:11:30
I skimmed through it and it's no different. Also, it cuts off at the Stockholm feild trip thing. Mayb it's because I'm using the XBOX 360 internet browser instead of a PC, I dunno
Rock Candy1281612811
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2015-01-10 18:00:36
Yeah, that doesn't mean I have rewritten it three times already. It is not done, thus no update on site.
ethan5676
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2015-03-29 19:27:58
finish already!