Comment #11460
Rock Candy1146011456
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2014-06-16 06:31:03

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But I'm not a good writer...
moonkingdomify
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2014-06-19 23:23:30
Dude, well I'm assuming through your youtube channel that you're male. You were able to make me feel for characters in porn games with Zu's backstory. Seriously, you have no trouble at least writing plot and characters .
Rock Candy1147011467
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2014-06-20 01:00:03
I'm not happy with how those are at the moment. I'm attempting to rewrite them again to make them more sensible.
The Phantom
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2014-07-08 11:49:12
I don't know why you're unhappy with the backstories, THEIR GREAT DUDE!
Rock Candy1158011577
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2014-07-08 12:52:35
No they're not. Much improvement is needed.
The Phantom
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2014-07-08 21:40:42
Improvement? What kind of improvement?
Rock Candy1158511583
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2014-07-09 00:16:31
Improvement on fixing plotholes, personlaity and other such things. They're kinda dumb at the moment.