News: Damn it!!
It's STILL not done! I can't believe it!
Well, I can, actually. I had the voiceactress re-record some things, and it took a while to get them recorded again. But it's all done now, I hope, so it should only be up to my codan man to fix it up. He told me he was busy with chinese new years and stuff, but I hope he'll get free soon.

Meanwhile, take a look at Rock Candy [My First Robot], a flash I made while waiting for the soundfiles. Not including the time it took to draw the art, I finished this in about 2 days. So don't go expect a masterpiece!

And finally, Zu's new backstory is availible for proofreading! It's got some notes cluttered abuot, but it is mostly readable. Give it a read and leave a comment, I wanna know what ya all think of it, if it is an improvement over the last attempt.
Have in mind that it is compressed, since my original vision would be over 30 pages. And that'd take forever to get right, since I'd always change small details, resulting in rewrites all around the story. Keeping it basic, lets me focus on the big picture, and that's what this is. It's still around 13 pages, so don't be all too disappointed!

And not only that, I think I've finished Zoo's profile image!
She looks pretty awesome now, compared to her previous profile image.
At least, I think so. If there's anything questionable about it, I'll try to fix it.

I drew a couple of pictures too.
Happy birthday Zara!! Her birthday was a few days ago, so I drew this little thing to celebrate her~.
And "Hard Work!" featuring dickgirl Ellie. It stems from a little inside joke between me and a friend, haw haw. It should be enjoyable even if you don't get it!

Was that all? I think so. I'll have the other flash uploaded as soon as it gets done, like I promised before. I can only hope it gets finished sooner rahter than later. I'm also going to visit my dad for the latter half of the week, so the next update will most likely be the following monday or tuesday. Just letting ya know in advance!
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duck wrote:
ponis wrote:
kojiro wrote:
he already said the next update would be on monday or tuesday because he wouldn't be home....
what the fuck? don't you have a penis?

penis cant wait. penis hate to wait.

and you are an abnormal faggot without penis

reported
You're wrong. A penis could wait, a dick couldn't.
http://i.imgur.com/rr5XtZu.jpg
ponis wrote:
kojiro wrote:
he already said the next update would be on monday or tuesday because he wouldn't be home....
what the fuck? don't you have a penis?

penis cant wait. penis hate to wait.

and you are an abnormal faggot without penis

reported
You're wrong. A penis could wait, a dick couldn't.
kojiro wrote:
he already said the next update would be on monday or tuesday because he wouldn't be home....
what the fuck? don't you have a penis?

penis cant wait. penis hate to wait.

and you are an abnormal faggot without penis

reported
he already said the next update would be on monday or tuesday because he wouldn't be home....
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE SUNDAY UPDATE I HAVE TO GO TO WORK IN TWO HOURS AND I HAVENT FAPPED YET.
WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME, RC.
WHY.
You could at least post something like: fuck u guys i hav nothinto u tonig. But leave us without the sundays post?
:(
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Alright, Rock. I'm reading through and rewriting the backstory as we speak. It's taking a while, and there's some concerns. Mostly, would you want the copy to be in third-person-biographic, or third-person-novellic? Basically, do you want it in a dry, sparse, facts only manner, or d'ya want it to read like a true short story? Also, which file format? Would it be .docx, .odt, or just plain .txt? 'Cause I can convert it to just about anything.
What kind of rewrite are you doing? What are you aiming for? Just fix spelling errors or story things in general?
My original vision was around 30 pages smockfull of tiny details. It was close to being a small novel, haw haw.
I don't think it matters what format you use, it's easy enough to find something to open most common documents. .txt is kinda basic though.
Well, as it sits the story sits at 13 pages. Given some time (and a little creative freedom [don't worry, I'm not changing anything character-wise or timeline-wise! Just how it's written.]), it should come out as detailed as it needs to be. I can't say how long it would be, but the way I think it would be best written would be as a third-person omniscient, basically being a narrator that knows everything. That way all the details are retained, the events as they're told are presented as already being passed, and a sense of having a personal connection is established. Would that work?
Yeah, it would be good. Keep in mind that there are still things that need to be worked out, so if you're rewriting it I kind of need to talk more with ya.
Well right now I've only written out the main points, so any added information would be nice. I'm holding off until I get ALL the information, so...
Well, where can I talk to you directly?
[email protected]. Just send whatever you need.
I sent you an email.
Received and replied. And now we pass the time waiting for Besped's flash by writing...
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Alright, Rock. I'm reading through and rewriting the backstory as we speak. It's taking a while, and there's some concerns. Mostly, would you want the copy to be in third-person-biographic, or third-person-novellic? Basically, do you want it in a dry, sparse, facts only manner, or d'ya want it to read like a true short story? Also, which file format? Would it be .docx, .odt, or just plain .txt? 'Cause I can convert it to just about anything.
What kind of rewrite are you doing? What are you aiming for? Just fix spelling errors or story things in general?
My original vision was around 30 pages smockfull of tiny details. It was close to being a small novel, haw haw.
I don't think it matters what format you use, it's easy enough to find something to open most common documents. .txt is kinda basic though.
Well, as it sits the story sits at 13 pages. Given some time (and a little creative freedom [don't worry, I'm not changing anything character-wise or timeline-wise! Just how it's written.]), it should come out as detailed as it needs to be. I can't say how long it would be, but the way I think it would be best written would be as a third-person omniscient, basically being a narrator that knows everything. That way all the details are retained, the events as they're told are presented as already being passed, and a sense of having a personal connection is established. Would that work?
Yeah, it would be good. Keep in mind that there are still things that need to be worked out, so if you're rewriting it I kind of need to talk more with ya.
Well right now I've only written out the main points, so any added information would be nice. I'm holding off until I get ALL the information, so...
Well, where can I talk to you directly?
[email protected]. Just send whatever you need.
I sent you an email.
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Alright, Rock. I'm reading through and rewriting the backstory as we speak. It's taking a while, and there's some concerns. Mostly, would you want the copy to be in third-person-biographic, or third-person-novellic? Basically, do you want it in a dry, sparse, facts only manner, or d'ya want it to read like a true short story? Also, which file format? Would it be .docx, .odt, or just plain .txt? 'Cause I can convert it to just about anything.
What kind of rewrite are you doing? What are you aiming for? Just fix spelling errors or story things in general?
My original vision was around 30 pages smockfull of tiny details. It was close to being a small novel, haw haw.
I don't think it matters what format you use, it's easy enough to find something to open most common documents. .txt is kinda basic though.
Well, as it sits the story sits at 13 pages. Given some time (and a little creative freedom [don't worry, I'm not changing anything character-wise or timeline-wise! Just how it's written.]), it should come out as detailed as it needs to be. I can't say how long it would be, but the way I think it would be best written would be as a third-person omniscient, basically being a narrator that knows everything. That way all the details are retained, the events as they're told are presented as already being passed, and a sense of having a personal connection is established. Would that work?
Yeah, it would be good. Keep in mind that there are still things that need to be worked out, so if you're rewriting it I kind of need to talk more with ya.
Well right now I've only written out the main points, so any added information would be nice. I'm holding off until I get ALL the information, so...
Well, where can I talk to you directly?
[email protected]. Just send whatever you need.
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Rock Candy wrote:
Siglund wrote:
Alright, Rock. I'm reading through and rewriting the backstory as we speak. It's taking a while, and there's some concerns. Mostly, would you want the copy to be in third-person-biographic, or third-person-novellic? Basically, do you want it in a dry, sparse, facts only manner, or d'ya want it to read like a true short story? Also, which file format? Would it be .docx, .odt, or just plain .txt? 'Cause I can convert it to just about anything.
What kind of rewrite are you doing? What are you aiming for? Just fix spelling errors or story things in general?
My original vision was around 30 pages smockfull of tiny details. It was close to being a small novel, haw haw.
I don't think it matters what format you use, it's easy enough to find something to open most common documents. .txt is kinda basic though.
Well, as it sits the story sits at 13 pages. Given some time (and a little creative freedom [don't worry, I'm not changing anything character-wise or timeline-wise! Just how it's written.]), it should come out as detailed as it needs to be. I can't say how long it would be, but the way I think it would be best written would be as a third-person omniscient, basically being a narrator that knows everything. That way all the details are retained, the events as they're told are presented as already being passed, and a sense of having a personal connection is established. Would that work?
Yeah, it would be good. Keep in mind that there are still things that need to be worked out, so if you're rewriting it I kind of need to talk more with ya.
Well right now I've only written out the main points, so any added information would be nice. I'm holding off until I get ALL the information, so...
Well, where can I talk to you directly?
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